Wedding Vows

Who could know that there are a million and one wedding vows on the internet, and I think that I have read them all today. But who would have guessed that the fourth one I found is just the perfect one, now if only my darling agrees. What do you think? Here it is:

Groom:
There was darkness for a long time and then there was light, and that light was you. Your love has given me wings, and our journey begins today. I pledge before this assembled company to be your husband from this day forward. Let us make of our two lives one life. I want you for today, tomorrow, and forever.

Bride:
I have dreamed my whole life of having someone as wonderful as you love me the way you do. I give myself to you as your wife, and I promise here to treasure for all of my days the love we celebrate today. Let us bring together our lives and find ourselves anew each day.

So whatcha think?????  Comments please!!!!!!!!!!!!